SECONDARY SCHOOL EFL STUDENTS’ DIFFICULTIES AND SOLUTIONS TO LEARNING ENGLISH PARAGRAPH WRITING

Authors

  • Vo Thi Anh Dao English Teacher, Hoa Nghia Primary School, Cho Lach District, Ben Tre Province, MA Candidate, Tra Vinh University, Vietnam
  • Thai Cong Dan Senior Lecturer, Dr., School of Foreign Languages, Can Tho University, Can Tho, Vietnam

DOI:

https://doi.org/10.46827/ejals.v7i2.552

Keywords:

secondary school, writing, difficulties, solutions, secondary students’ challenges, teaching methods

Abstract

This research investigates the difficulties faced by secondary school students in Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam, when learning English paragraph writing, and explores potential solutions to these challenges. The study involved 100 students from a secondary school, with insights gathered through questionnaires and interviews with 6 students and 4 EFL teachers. The aim was to understand the obstacles students encounter and the effectiveness of current teaching practices. Data were collected using questionnaires with a five-point Likert scale and analyzed through qualitative impressions rather than specific ratings for each criterion. The results indicated that students perceived their difficulties in learning paragraph writing as moderate. Common challenges included choosing appropriate writing styles for different contexts, insufficient practice in combining sentences, and limited feedback on sentence structures from teachers. Students also reported that the amount of writing practice provided in class was inadequate. To address these issues, the research suggests creating a collaborative learning environment, integrating vocabulary instruction with contextual topics, and focusing on sentence pattern practice. Students rated the strategy of collaborative learning highly, emphasizing the benefits of increased interaction between teachers and students. While students acknowledged their difficulties in paragraph writing, they also recognized potential solutions that involve more interactive and contextually relevant instruction. Teachers and curriculum developers should consider these findings to enhance writing instruction and better support EFL students in overcoming their writing challenges.

 

Author Biographies

  • Vo Thi Anh Dao, English Teacher, Hoa Nghia Primary School, Cho Lach District, Ben Tre Province, MA Candidate, Tra Vinh University, Vietnam

    Mrs. Vo Thi Anh Dao is currently a teacher of English in Ho Chi Minh City, and at Hoa Nghia Primary School, Cho Lach District, Ben Tre Province. She is pursuing her MA program in English Teaching Theory and Methodology at Tra Vinh University and will graduate in early 2025. Her main research interests are English learning and teaching at secondary, English skills, testing and evaluation for non-English majored students at secondary education institutes. She can be contacted at vothianhdao141995@gmail.com

  • Thai Cong Dan, Senior Lecturer, Dr., School of Foreign Languages, Can Tho University, Can Tho, Vietnam

    Mr. Thai Cong Dan, is presently senior lecturer of English, School of Foreign Languages, Can Tho University (CTU), Vietnam, -cum-a project manager. He has held his PhD at Naresuan University, Thailand, since 2010 in Educational Administration (English program). He got his MA in Cultural aspects and Literature from University of Notre Dame du Lac, Indiana, USA, in 1999. His main research interests are TEF/TESOL issues, intercultural communication, high school and higher education levels in English learning and teaching, English program management, curriculum design, testing and evaluation, ESP for Tourism, Political Education, Food Technology, professional development and educational administration. He can be reached at tcdan@ctu.edu.vn. His ORCID is at https://orcid.org/0009-0002-9566-8128.

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2024-09-17

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